Black Poetry : WALLZ I LOOK UPON

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  1. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such wallz I look upon
    neva seeing whatz passed
    I knew of such growing grass
    that i neva took a step on its ground
    because i was full of frownz
    shoot... i even got the attention of being a clown
    Yes in my own town
    being rejected by my community
    I didn't know whether to think I was part of its unity
    My life was vision of darkness
    there was no sparkness
    trap in lies
    asking myself, why tries?
    I seem 2 be in cages with passing pages
    dayz of shame when people callled me out my name
    then being framed 4 doing payback
    because all I got was feed back
    can yall believe that?
    I know life has no limit
    so why should I be comittied of doing such crimes that gave me time
    yo i know this rhymes
    now i know I must walk the trails with fails
    keeping my head up and forgetting about being fed up
    I know my mom is reminiscing because I am missing
    so now Ima take a chance and be advanced
    no more crying and thinking about dieing
    Ima start relying
    on who, u ask?
    God!

    dedicated 2 the jail birds
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soldier Story

    I believe it GHETTO,

    The facts reveal what you said,

    Sooooooooooo...

    Flow-On... (Keep it real)

    'til the break of dawn truth reveals

    Spill some wine for those who've gone

    Fight the good fight all alone

    And undo injustice casting stones

    With GOD on your face (Much Love) :deal:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stank u, which meanz thank u, im glad u was feelin it, becuz i sholl was worried, and im glad u can believe dat (koolaid smiling) now u gotta sista feelin jolly
     
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    ya scribe is tyte and on the real
    flow on ...................................
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STANK U RICH, I WILL FLOW ON...
    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes poet i like your flo of style keep gracing us with your talent. flo on poet.:love:
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i will my sistah, and i will flo on with non stop, im glad u feelin it NEVAR

    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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