Black Poetry : Walls

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by iwannabe, Sep 21, 2005.

  1. iwannabe

    iwannabe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walls

    If these walls could speak
    Would u listen or believe
    Could u succeed or achieve
    Any better if they would speak

    They hear all that happens
    The sorrowful and the placid
    All the reactions
    And all the interactions of passion
    All the conjunctions of hate
    The moments of adversity
    And defining moments of fate
    But walls wont speak
    And it makes me irate

    Im tired of those who never give
    But only take
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ........da walls
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the metaphor, yes some folks are like walls. Tight write poet.
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WATZ,
    oh my.
    the realness has been brought
    nice.
     
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