Black Poetry : WALLS

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Build around u
    this wall
    heart covered in
    this wall
    where love is blocked
    why me !
    u can't feel da passion
    u can't taste the joy
    from the built wall
    like in a cage
    a box of 4 corners
    the great walls
    can and shall crumble
    under the humble love
    i bring

    no need to be shy
    tonight together it's
    u and i
    as the wall fall
    on the beckon call
    of love
    from above in flyte
    u can't be hard
    yet so gentle & soft
    eyes of a beauty
    body like a diamond
    ya essences of a pearl
    so the wall can fall

    build for safe keeps
    but i enter as u sleep
    like a master of dreams
    so wake up and feel my
    theme of love
    in the right corner is a crack
    when i seep in like da wind
    and kiss u like a breeze
    caressing ya body
    swoopin under ya dress
    soon da crack spread
    and confess whispers heard
    from the love's sweet word
    so no need to run
    holding self inside a wall
    they call a block
    today it come down !!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WALLS FALL

    Built around me
    Where love was once block
    The walls start to uncover

    dont know why.......

    Feelin the passion
    Tastin the joy….
    Within the hands of time…..
    My love lays down
    As u and I climb to
    the highest mountain..
    heart covered of
    smooth armour…
    inside of its on cage…
    it yearns to engage…
    as the walls
    begin to crumble
    from the humble love
    you place upon it

    why me!

    tonight together u and I
    as the shyness goes in a hush
    tears run down my face
    as the wall falls
    on the beckon call of love….
    From above we take flyte
    hands of satin
    heart of gold
    the essences of u flow

    but as is......

    awaken in the theme
    of your love…
    as it seeps in and
    takes over my heart…
    kissin me like a fresh
    summer breeze blowin
    in da wind as the
    walls tumble down
    confessin of sweet love
    whispers float in the air…
    I wont run away but run to you
    Today it come down

    something so rare...
    do you dare......
    will you care....
    as i come to you
    on the winds of love...
    from above i came.......
    full of love....
    within the hands of time......Angel
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good luck on bustin down the walls, $$RICH$$. I always get those kinda girls - it's a hard job. this drop is tight, my brothah. peace
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you make a sistah wanna build walls
    just to feel you knock'em down :)

    flo' on brotha... flo' on



    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rich this here i feld...and i,m shure a lot of other people to...


    yes afraid to love again..

    and i never was before..



    Beautiful piece poet..


    keep writting...



    Love L..
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz angel nice flow

    thankz gempis u know how it be

    thankz CoCo sometime building it up as i rock it down
    is the fun part dat i love

    thankz LibertyLady indeed one be afraid to open self heart
    but sooner they will

    peace family thankz for the visit & love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When the walls barriers fall down, the real flows begin...Wonderfully posed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed watz true love come rushing in

    cindy ...u on the case to the point and
    true love the vibe .......my Chick !!
    Thankz ladies
     
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