Black Poetry : Wallow

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  1. Onichika

    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Wallow

    A million pieces to put back just right
    Aint no puzzle game this is my life fight
    Struggling to see the picture in the dead of the night
    Hands frantic, im desperate close to panic
    I wanna get on, touch the fantasy I longed
    What many take for granite all along
    I aint a pond to be played
    Suffering, so like crack someone gets paid
    I pray for vengeance for those who slayed
    The 60’s had the beast bleeding freely
    Our fallen leader still got the passion to reach me
    God teach me how to be a better man
    World wind got me cursed and confused, unable to stand
    Begging for rations from the warden
    Follow the blind, so for rations I war’n?
    Until I guard the rations for them
    Desperate for living in prison
    Natures fail safe just won’t give in
    Hopes loan too many years overdue
    Dulling the pain with little bit of brew
    2006 hoping to make it through
    Even if it lied what fvck can I do


     
  2. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It be's like that don't it, ain't no need in sugar coating it. you did a great job of expressing how you feel and how it is.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime we face this yet we get through the storm
    nice drop i feel ya !
     
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    So true .
     
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    AWESOME POET:love:
     
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    Wallow we can get through
    Yes another brother slayed
    One of our promonte leaders died
    Now we live for our future
    Deep piece Poet-Loved It
     
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    im feeling this wallow flow on my sista!!!!!
     
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    Onichika Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the support
     
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    Keep on spreading the love.
     
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    We've all wallowed in our despair a time or two, when we're in the thick of it, it's hard not to do. Feeling your words here.
     
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