Quiet Poetry Lounge : Walking Tall ...Our Kings

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Feb 24, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Our kings have such a debonair walk...
    don't even want to hear yall talk.

    Strolling with melanin in each step,
    as they glide and stride, just filled with pep.

    Stepping strong with power and grace,
    can't mistake his walk, with no other race.

    Left foot first as he makes his trip...
    right goes next, with a little bit of dip.

    A swivel in his hip, tops off his flair,
    a walk like no other ...no others out there.

    A true soul brother, always number "1,"
    made for a black Queen, as we stroll under the sun.

    Cause we always step back, and watch that stroll,
    as our bodies are raging ...out of control.

    It's been a short time since your fall...
    but in our hearts, you're still walking tall.

    Don't need no bling, his swings the thing...
    hearts singing for our King...

    Warriors and soldiers in disguise,
    step one two, cause we know they're fine,

    divine, always on time, one of a kind...
    [email protected] your walk just blows our minds.
     
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    Well alright now....... :)

    There sho ain't nothing better than watching
    a warrior do his thang.../ Their style and grace
    is instinctive...I love the rhythm, flow and
    description in this piece.

    Our brothers will love it!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Queentswana

    This is so very beautiful.

    Thank you for thinking of us.

    Thank you for supporting us.

    Thank you for keeping it real...cuz we did fall.

    Thank you for telling us how we make you feel...that means a lot to us.

    We love you, Queen.

    (((((((((((((( QueenTswana )))))))))))))
     
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    There is nothing more sexier than a black mans walk, you hit the nail on the head my sister, thank you :welldone:

    Much love
    Remby
     
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    Hail to the Queen

    Thank you on behalf of Brothers everywhere, regardless of whatever
    situation they are in.


    Thank you on behalf of Blackman-children yet to be born.



    Thank you on behalf of Black Sons of the Revolution. :luvu:
     
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    You got that right aint nothing sexier then how a black man walks...the boldness and the strenght in a strong black man...likes this flow sis!!!!

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    This piece makes me envision a brotha strollin by, each foot planted with a purpose. Yes, their stride is something to behold, and you captured it in words. Flow on please.
     
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    this was it and u did it again see queenz as such
    make Kings strut tall and one thing i learned is
    a queen will catch a brutha fall on call she alway
    the back bone .........i had to get up and walk for a min.
    Thankz for this i'm proud and feel the greatest pride in my stride
    whewwwwwwwwwwwww!!

    110% awesome scribe u vibe here sis my fist in the air
     
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