Quiet Poetry Lounge : walking in the rain

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like the drips
    that drop ova me
    walking in the rain
    of love
    to my queen of soul
    unfolding the warmth
    of bodies beside the
    great waters of fall
    walking in da rain
    soak & wet thinking
    of her smile
    the way she walk
    how she talk
    da way she feel
    how she thrill
    send me in chills
    if love can kill
    i be dead
    from the love
    in da rain drops
    upside my head
    running down my face
    like tears of grace
    taking my mind into a
    deep place where i
    hold her love so dear
    wit no fears but cheers
    she a fine treasure
    by all measure and my
    sweet pleasure of joy
    walking in da rain
    wit the one i love
    on my mind :luv:
    let it RAIN on me
    let it rainnnnnnnnnnnn!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it rain
    let it rain
    i can feel the vibe
    this was smooth
    flow on
    pour it on out
    loving ya style :luv:
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a lovely sentiment. Reminds me of that old Love Unlimited song. Serene flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes
    sistah angel
    as it rain the
    love flow out
    theirs nothing
    a heart can't take
    in da rain of love

    yes indeed sistah watz
    it too takes me back in the days
    of that sweet some
    when i walk in the rain it release
    the warmth of joy thinking of that
    one somebody that very lovin heart

    thankz for all the lovin support and visiting my space
     
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    What is it about the rain?
    The sound it makes,
    when it dances on the window pane
    so enchanting! So serene!
    Enticing thoughts of ones love
    like a beautiful song.
    Let it rain! by all means let it rain!
    Well posed! Mr.Rich
    Beautiful indeed!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    don't know purplemoon but i sho nuff love it
    it bring sweet hush and tunes of love like a
    magical musical box of the tap , drop , on
    da window thanks sistah for the love and support
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    as the rain fall
    strolling slowly
    every drop
    splashing in my
    heart my mind
    wonders off into
    the sky of love
    if it could be
    then i would
    as da rain fall
     
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    Brother...I'm standing in your poetic rain...
    and it feels great!

    Wonderful piece!
     
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    yes yes yes
    the sweet drops of
    rain falling deeper
    into my soul where
    true love get soaked
    in the splash
    walk in the rain wit me
    it feel so divine
    thankz sistah sage
     
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    rasheed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    RICH,
    Very nice love flow....Let it rain, let it rain, let it rain.....

    Peace and Blessings
     
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