Black Poetry : Walking blindly in love

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  1. asimplepoet

    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How did you get so entangled into my soul ties?
    A deeper emotional connection as time flies
    Love started as gentle as butterfly kisses
    And grew into an awesome consuming bliss
    Upon waking God gets my first thought
    But you’re the very next image caught
    My first words spoken to a mortal are to you
    With your call my day starts fresh and anew
    Several times through the course of the day
    My mind somehow magically slips your way
    I take care of business but on you my mind stays
    Daily, your name is on my lips even when I pray
    Yes I’ve known love before but this is an exception
    Never loved anyone who has been my soul’s reflection
    Sometimes bewildered because this is so truly unique
    No guide to help cipher where this love shall peak
    But I gladly go into the unknown holding your hand
    Trusting and praying that you have an ultimate plan
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    so spiritual

    give praise

    you are a powerful woman

    by giving that statement there you give someone great power
    and if they're smart they will tap into

    if they know how

    your writing is really on fire right now
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you my brother for the read and compliments. they are greatly appreciated :love:
     
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    Hello Asimplepoet...

    I enjoyed how it felt reading your lines.

    Beautiful write!



    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  5. Clyde C Coger Jr

    Clyde C Coger Jr going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    In the Spirit of Sankofa and Love!





    asimplepoet,

    You did it again: Simply beautiful! Magnificent! Real! Tingling! Sensational! So, so, so...African, nothing but Love...Pure! Walking Blindly with the Eyes of Faith
     
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    oh....poet! <sigh so deeply> dont I know it! Yes.....yes.....I am so inside of you on this.

    this feeling is intoxicating....


    Thank you so much for bringing to life the feelings of my heart....
     
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    asimplepoet - You've captured something quite sweet with this. It's sweet enough to give somebody a cavity. And it's not cake or chocolate or cinnamon rolls. It's that candy that blinds the eye but keeps that vision of walking hand in hand with Love all the way into tasty Eternity and smiling. Well done asimplepoet. We all want some ! Namyh
     
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    asimplepoet:
    Aahh sukie sukie now...
    This is so lovely and such
    wonderful feelings expressed
    I hear you...I hear you



    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...now i was blindly hit by this sweet release
     
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    In the Spirit of Sankofa!





    $$RICH$$,

    Isn’t she lovely, Rich?
     
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