Black Poetry : walk wit me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Feb 22, 2004.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Walk wit Me

    Da boy

    Walk wit me
    Innocent jewels
    Watch how men become fools
    Misused
    Young girls abused
    Son’s bruise from a father
    That don’t bother
    To speak
    All he knows is anger
    To himself and to his wife he’s a stranger
    His actions caused his own torched chamber
    He used to be away, now his way is danger

    A dangerous way to see the light
    Oh how he used to be in flight
    A bird can soar but he must come down
    And one day his wing will brake, and he’ll hit the ground

    The life he saw was what he never seen
    His dream
    What one to get cream
    And get a killa team
    With a wife, kids, washing the car, mowing the lawn
    Icin his wife fo valentines and try to spawn
    Younger breeds to succeed
    And help heal other men when they bleed
    But indeed
    The speed
    Of all his unknown deeds
    Undone
    And his need is a

    A dangerous way to see the light
    Oh how he used to be in flight
    A bird can soar but he must come down
    And one day his wing will brake, and he’ll hit the ground

    But will he get back up………..?
    Will u….?



    "life after platinum"
    copyright daniel davis
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this
    it speaks loud
    but will they see the
    message within
    tight drop fo sho
    Angel
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Disappointment can make some turn a blind eye to what they do have. Deep drop.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this heard within very loud and strong
    poet flow on
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Get ya flo on poet.....
     
  6. Khasm13

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    this was a tyte piece son....word
    one love
    khasm
     
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