Quiet Poetry Lounge : Walk Soft...(exerpt)

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  1. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We
    Just
    Smo-Kin
    Al-ways
    Drinkin
    Al-ways BROKE
    AND
    Ne-ver THINKIN
    The jungle got us trapped, swingin on trees,
    We monkeys.
    Ghetto view of alleyways and junkeys.
    How can I show you love for simple things?
    Chocolate oil and silver promise rings.
    If I could teach the world to sing
    melodies of Love and Respect for human beings.
    There would be no way to rest without waking.
    Nyggas wanna past the test before taking...
    I got four more lines to go, and let YOU know,
    that the state of mind of Man
    it reflects in your flow.
    So when you reach the mind, you teach and find the lesson.....
    Just BEING here ain't the Blessin'.

    Walk Soft
    With that BIG STICK until you take your last step
    You can talk
    But many people won't even listen 'til you takin your last breath...

    Liquydated Sound 2003/ASCAP
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice read ....again welcome
    i see ya pen has much to say
    let it speak on !
     
  3. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, yeah I never run out of flowetry. I won't poetically spam y'all though!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's all good poetically spray
    the scribes just don't crash
    with 7 or 8 at once but drop 3 or 4
    and love be given as u give
    liking ya flow !
     
  5. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Richie Rich, will take heed!
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..powerful flow...deep...feeling this
    Peace
     
  7. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate that, merci! It's one that came through me faster than I could grab a pen, truly a 'flow'.
     
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    str8 poetic scribing
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words were deep and stirring. Very wise scribe!
     
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    i agree with angeli
    this was a wise scribe
    that i peep with my inner eye
    peace
    khasm
     
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