Black Poetry : WALK ON!

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Closed my eyes,
    and you were gone.
    Didn't take long
    for me to catch on
    to all your stupid little lies
    slipping off your crooked tongue.

    You silly little liar, thought I wouldn't see
    through the mire of your betrayal of me.
    Couldn't you tell, I witnessed
    the ugliness in you
    staring right back at me?

    Did you believe you could
    keep doing me like this,
    leaving me in the cold dark abyss
    clenching my angry fists?

    You see, about you,
    I don't worry anymore.
    I've grown sure and strong
    to protect my precious soul.

    You are not my possessor.
    I own who I am.
    In myself I have faith.
    I am the keeper of my destiny.

    Walk on, I don't need you.
    I am not that weak
    little girl from those
    many years ago.

    I am a woman.
    I am strong.
    I am holding on.
    Watch me,
    as I walk on!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl gon ahead!!!!!!! I love tis flow!!1 it's all about you, not about him! :) :thanks: for sharinthis one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o' yes feel ya here tyte scribe of self
     
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    well alright!!!

    you go head & WALK ON gurl!!!... better your inner & outer world...

    I am a woman.
    I am strong.
    I am holding on.
    Watch me,
    as I walk on!

    oh yeeesss... i like this flow fa sho!!!... this excerpt will be my meditative chant from now on... heartfelt :)

    peace
     
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    Well, "Walk On" Sierra...heard u loud & clear on this...This flow was quite tyte!

    My Fav Part...
    "You are not my possessor.
    I own who I am.
    In myself I have faith.
    I am the keeper of my destiny."
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him girl!!!
    Let da truth be told!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  7. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey SwtT,

    Thanks so much, girl!! I'm glad you're with me on this!! You are so right, it is all about me!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich,

    Thanks so much for your comforting words!! I appreciate the read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  9. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey NADIA,

    You are so right, girl!! WOW!! Really, you'll use words I wrote to meditate with? I better try this!! Thanks for writing!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey angelicsage,

    I am so glad you hear me!! Thanks for writing!! We must have faith in who we are so we may travel our journeys!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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