Black Poetry : Walk In...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Dec 9, 2002.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Cross da sky blue
    ova da ocean line
    in silent whisper
    u walked in

    into my joy
    where my heart so pure
    under my thoughts
    where my soul is clear
    u walked in

    to grasp my love
    cuddle as a dove
    gently i looked above
    coz!
    u walked in

    inside my spirit
    da life i live
    u took my emotions
    da warm embrace
    never did u seek
    da look on my face
    u only trace my manhood
    within my gear
    not once was a fear
    da soulds of ya voice
    was so dear
    coz!
    u walked in

    yet learned it not here
    my heart & love
    has grace to a new place
    see she is my light
    da heart of my joy
    she never cuss nor fuss
    or play me like a toy
    she trace my inner soul
    bless me with faith
    but u had to walk in !!

    sorry!
    now get out !:maddd:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You's a baaaaaaaaad boy Flyte!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    Rich man you are scribing like never before...This is powerful stuff here bruh!!!!!
     
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    rich i love this but ..... u got me with the twist, the abrupt like not expected ending ..... seems like pen has meet paper again and u go my friend u go .....
     
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    rich.


    don't you just hate unexpected interruptions?!! :lol:

    i'm feelin' your flow on this one!!
    sooo... who is she?? (hahaha)

    alwayspeace,
    elayne.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GQ & BISHOP man y'all know dis thang works out
    Thanks my Bruthas
     
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    herlove da twisted thang dat happen in da sweet moments
    word spoken loud !

    elayne ........now u know it wasn't cool in my space while
    my gurl was in da room .........who is she !?
    look in the mirror who u see ! hehehehe....
     
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    rich, that ending made me bust out laughing.
    nice post...
     
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    see k0k0......when something old strolls in upon the new
    we all have to do what we do...thank u sistah Queen..
     
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    NIce flow with the words
     
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