Black Poetry : waking thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Jan 31, 2003.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wake
    feeling blue
    not knowing what to do
    with thoughts of you
    kissing the corners of my mind

    i rise
    feeling "unmoved"
    spiritless in all that i do
    my motivation seems to still be in a slumber
    of my toss and turn session i had
    with the pillow last night

    i go on with my routine to get ready for a "new"
    yet all i do is think of the next time
    that you will "come through"
    i want to see your face when i wake
    i want to be by your side when i rise
    i want you to be part of my "routine"

    what do i do to gain my self composure back!
     
  2. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell him to come through when the sun is up. :)

    This was a nice flow ladybug
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ladybug, just keep on doing what you're doing for poetry.

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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    all of the love is very much so appreciated....thank you!
     
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