Black Poetry : wakin up smilin

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 5, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one day
    i want to wake up on a sunny warm Sunday
    in a great big califohnia kang size bed
    under big fluffy down blankets
    on top of a soft down mattress cover
    to soft grover washington jr jazz
    smellin fresh bread baking in the oven
    hot coffee brewing
    you whispering in my ear to wake up
    and lay up on you...
    sunshine streaming through white curtains
    a nice breeze floating through the cracked window
    children happy playing outside in the back
    one day
    i wanna wake up like that.
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful imagery. you paineted a Rembrandt here.

    tps
     
  3. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much!
    just daydreaming as usual...
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    ME TOO...

    ****.

    i love this peice! it painted such a beautifully serene picture.
     
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    yeah, it was a nice piece, but then i started thinking, well who got the kids up and let them go outside? So wait a minute, your man got up and took care of the kids and is makin' coffee and bakin' bread and putting on jazz? Then I had to re-read it...those weren't your kids outside, you just like to hear 'em! Nice piece, I got a kick out of it
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you don't know how tired i am of waking up to
    whining crying mommy i'm hungry
    babe can you do this or that...
    I REALLY WANT TO CUSS
    i really would to wake up this way one morning...

    thanks for listening to me breathe....
     
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