Black Poetry : Wake up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Defiantson, Sep 18, 2006.

  1. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wake up

    How real is real
    When real isn't even real
    Cause if you think about it
    Even a lie
    Has some sort
    Truth to it

    So don't come at me
    With this and that
    And that bull **** that
    Has your minds contemplating
    Over ignorant thoughts

    I am just a metaphor
    Of whom they want me to be
    I walk up right
    More like G_d like

    Not thinking of ecstasy
    But more of normality
    Giving you a sense of formality

    The government
    Fills with us with visions
    Of subliminal division
    That we have us living
    A from of self-destruction

    With our ghettoized
    State of mind
    That keeps us wrong
    Creating bull**** philosophies

    It’s our hypocritical thought
    That keeps our mind
    Translucent in this
    Thought of slavery

    See to white people
    Willie Lynch wrote
    A master piece

    And we are just
    Stupid enough
    To fallow suit
    In his hierocracy

    Think about it
    Dark against light
    Light against dark

    Boy against man
    And man against boy

    Woman against man
    And man against woman
    A process of racial division

    Now think before you act
    Cause our decisions
    Create multiple contusions

    To our already
    Thoughts of idiotic
    Conclusions

    Now wake up!!!!

    America is a playground
    Where confusion is fallowed
    By subliminal erections

    Of political correctness
    When did Bush
    Ever fix anything

    No child left behind
    A mockery of our education system
    Proving that children lack more now
    Then ever before

    The so called war on terrorists
    War in Iraq
    Sending soldiers to do his bidding

    While his pockets are getting fatter
    Cause the price of gas is sky high
    Making the rich richer
    And the poor poorer

    So who is he kidding
    When he lies to America
    For is own personal wealth
    And all I can say is

    WAKE THE [email protected] UP!!!!!!
    AND LET THE TRUTH BE TOLD
     
  2. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't run from the truth run to the truth.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I step right in it , to accept it and knoweth of it
    i'm wide awake now ! flow head on !!!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thats what I'm talking about....
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man defiantson i just felt that right there boo! ahhh man that piece spoke to me love. whew strong. somebody fan me!
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Nevar....
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whats wrong love its like you not in the mood tonight. come tell me whats wrong love!:kiss1:
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm good ma....
     
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    The rawness of the poem had me ready to rage I am feeling it.
     
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    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks and glad to hear that
     
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