Quiet Poetry Lounge : wake up !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Sep 4, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    At first light
    ya eyes set sight
    on da wake up
    of love sent from
    above as it caress
    u to a delight inside
    da moment of bliss
    u and i sharing a kiss
    i call u early morn
    til da break of dawn
    sunshine love
    wake up! :sleep:
     
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    As the sun rise
    my eyes r open
    The flowers awake
    Feeling the comfort
    Bliss of us
    I answer the call
    wake up!!!

    liking this vibe... :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UNTO YA TENDER EYES
    I STAND TO YA SUPRISE
    TO FEED U LOVE UNTOUCHED
    AND A WARMTH A QUEEN TO
    CLUTCH ON TO AT WAKE UP
    AS WE GO INTO DA MORNING
    BLISS OF HAPPINESS
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    embrace the soul hello...
    my eyes are wide
    and all i see is you
    feed me love untouch
    invade my soul....
    full of morning bliss
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
    wake on up gurl !!!!! yummy com'mo
    in da room com'mo in da room !
     
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    Such lovely words to wakeup to...sweet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    live inside it coz they flow sweetly
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    nice drop

    wake up
    The ache to beat the oppressor
    The forgiveness and cries for help
    Needing God to come in and answer
    wake up the
    Lyrical motions of the swiftness of the pen
    Create an atmosphere of freedom and revivals
    With the spiritual overtones freeing the damned
    Writing intensifies the mind, heart and soul
    Clapping your hands to the beat of the verbs
    Calling upon Kings and Queens, nouns abounding
    Taping you pen or clicking the keys on the keyboard
    wake up
    To a song in your head, letting the words flow through the vision
    For it is written
    That everyone should read the hearts of the misplaced African
    Coping on paper with the injustices of the world
    we should all wake up
    Metronomically tap dancing rehearsed verses
    Lyrical rhythmic alphabetical formations
    Constructing an architectural marvel of phrases
    Conquering mountains that were disguised as molehills
    For it is written from up above
    Adoring the poetic extension of your lover
    Speaking in prose as love is emptied
    Scripting alliteration of verses while trying to maintain
    "Black body bellows beyond beauty"
    Stuttering, mind goes blank for a bit
    Soon to be back in sync with the pen
    Conjuring up spirits of unseen fears
    Afraid to connect the pen and paper
    Remembering yesterday's vision that you wrote down
    But never did
    Scheming to write a note of admiration to a secret admirer
    Squeezing your brain for
    Just
    The
    Right
    Words
    Like pricking your finger and noticing that one drop of blood
    The flow not quite right
    Words coming at you left and right, catching them as if
    You're catching fire flies in the sleepless summer nights
    Putting them in jars trying to hold on to something so beautiful
    But if you don't write, the words will surely die.
    Fore it needs to be written
    wake up and Write :bomb:
     
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    "I'm awake..." :spin:
    great concept Rich ^5
    and all these great flows
    that follow...
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hookup....WHOA

    One word.....~~~~~ BRILLIANT ~~~~~ :wink:
     
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