Black Poetry : Wake up!

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  1. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You lack insight, but you think you can see.
    So you don’t search, or try to touch your inner serenity.
    Afraid you might reveal a hint of femininity, so you hide behind pseudo-masculinity.
    You think you are more important than the holy trinity.
    It’s so sad you don’t even know your own identity.
    Adolescent in your mentality.
    Validating yourself via sexuality.
    Sexuality is your only form of reality.
    Motivated by insecurity.
    You strive for superiority.
    Only increasing your inferiority.
    You run from supreme divinity, bound in iniquity.
    Spiritual death, your ultimate penalty!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hear ya speak on let it be heard
    say dem wordz
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep! Your message was profound. Much love to you!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep scribe
    indeed
    posed well
    speaks loud
     
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    nice vibe on this drop
    yes it is indeed
    wake up time
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  6. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your poem is great
    what you say no one can debate
    Please continue to write and create
     
  7. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reply to your poem

    Your poem is great
    what you say no one can debate
    Please continue to write and create
     
  8. cojamalik

    cojamalik Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love!
     
  9. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa...

    Speak on it, sister.

    Truth hurts, but lies destroy.
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, this is profound. and yes, lies eat the soul. flow on, flow on
     
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