Black Poetry : Wake Me Up

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i never meant to become your daydream on Mulberry Street

    i thought for sure we could share some cookies n' cream so sweet

    but instead i melted our desert with an irrisistable Heat

    that came straight from Miami in my attempt to repeat

    a right that went wrong when i discovered your beat

    you played it so well that i still can't delete

    the impression you made on my heart but i'm afraid i'll always see your feet

    walking away with him singing songs

    that left up to my imagination make it hard to believe that me and you

    belong together



    love,

    howard
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard:
    Dont let her walk away.
    Im sure your luv will make her stay.:)

    Much Luv
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    go get ya woman !!! this is dope...loved it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was bittersweet howard, but you never know what the future may bring. Felt your heart in this.
     
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