Black Poetry : Waiting

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  1. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    Its 1:45 in the a.m.
    I should be sleeping
    But my mind is racing
    I'm in need of some relief
    From this crazy craving
    You got me starin at this phone
    waiting for it to ring
    The things I wanna do now
    Would make you wanna sing
    See right about now
    all you gotta do is dial
    Cuz tonight, baby trust
    I'll go the extra mile....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Carameldlite......
    waiting until his arrival
    to warm embrace
    as da truth lay upon thy
    face with thoughts
    so sweet and devine
    i can hear da notes playing
    in da song of rapture
     
  3. Bluewater

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    Hi Carameldlite
    wonderful poem
    and Rich come back added even more

    Peace & Love
     
  4. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was very expressive
    nice flow
    so flow on wit nonstop


    blackluv and bp
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, yearning can do that to a person, and you expressed it so well.
     
  6. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much for your comments
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Carameldlite

    This piece is tight.

    You should have titled it "Yearning" or "Immediate Desire" :D

    :toast:
     
  8. Carameldlite

    Carameldlite Active Member MEMBER

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    yeah your right, i should have. thanks ;)
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yea someone i truly love has me waiting also hopefully we will get the call. flo on poet!
     
  10. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Carameldlite:

    That Waiting is a mutha isn't it.
    You tell him wait broke the wagon so hurry up!!!:)

    Diggn' this flo.

    Much Luv
     
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