Black Poetry : Waiting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by river, Jul 25, 2005.

  1. river

    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    There's a poem in me somewhere
    There's got to be
    How could I ride a cresting wave
    And exhaust my ability to express
    I am waiting for the sneeze
    Nose poised in tittilation
    Its coming is a tease
    I am waiting for the image
    The sound of this pain
    The sight of this love
    The smell of last night
    The taste of tomorrow
    The touch of your lips on mine
    I am waiting for the poem
    That will tell me I am alive
    Whatever else I may think
    I am alive
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed and surely the taste the feel the poetic thrill
    will drift deep inside and have u spill a chill of lyrics
    hold on just wait ! ur alive by dis scribe ....Very nice
     
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    river Watch Her Flow MEMBER

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    Hey Rich!

    You start me to twitth
    Cerebral wheels rolling
    On the right side of the cavity
    That throbs with thoughts and dremas and God
    Synopsis of living ecstasy
     
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    peace,

    Indeed you are alive
    with every beautiful thought
    & your poetic expression
    is a blessin'
    & at the same time
    a beautiful lesson
    what a beautiful question..........................
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I particularly liked the line about waiting for the sneeze that brings a release. No need to wait for it to happen when it already has. Keep those great vibes coming.
     
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    indeed sista as i watch u make that wave
    of beauty and well alive
     
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