Quiet Poetry Lounge : Waiting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by miomina1, May 5, 2004.

  1. miomina1

    miomina1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No feeling in my hands
    Can't laugh, anymore
    Wanna cry all the time
    But don't know what for

    Hard to breath, I'm dying
    And can't feel my feet
    Heart's conjested from worry
    And don't wanna beat

    So, sometimes I'm numb
    Incoherant inside
    Looking up, to heaven's door
    Waiting, on a ride...
     
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    much love to you...
    i feel the sadness in your flow
    Peace and love
    as you release the flow
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY NICE FLOW .......
     
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    :sand: breezy feeling :sand:
    lovin this drop:wave:
     
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    This is what I come here for, to see something different, to step out of the routine. Thanks for posting your poem, thanks.
     
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    And that ride will come, in him they'll be peace. Felt and understood.
     
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    miomina,
    Nicely structured write, its rhythms its message; it speaks to me of faith and courage and patience ...
    " the reward of patience is paradise"

    Peace and Blessings....
     
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