Black Poetry : waiting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BlkButtefly, Mar 25, 2004.

  1. BlkButtefly

    BlkButtefly Member MEMBER

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    i wondered where you had gone
    till i felt your presence
    captivating me in your essence
    can you feel me penetrating
    your thoughts and feelings
    i am here by reason
    you summons me
    in my dreams
    is it my destiny
    to be here with you
    on this plane
    of infinity
    love has its place
    it is here with me
    take my hand
    as you did before
    never let go
    in time you will see
    you were not alone
    those tears you shed
    the pain you've endured
    over the years
    release your fears
    let love live again
    and begin your journey
    reach out into the galaxy
    and find your star
    you will see me
    not like before
    this light shines
    brightly emphasizing
    the glory i have attained
    waitin for your return
     
  2. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice ,really enjoyed
     
  3. BlkButtefly

    BlkButtefly Member MEMBER

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    Thanks my sista,
    this is the first piece
    i posted, glad i found this site!

    peace and blessings
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beautiful welcome within

    :jumping: welcome
    to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to lovin home u found
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    tyte drop flow on and visit our chat
    open mic too at www.destee.com/chat :spinn:
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful flow. Welcome to destee!!! I'm looking forward to reading more.
     
  6. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome to Destee :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:

    I get the feeling you will be another worthy addition to the fam
    Nice flow
    I'm listening :wink:

    Peace and love
     
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