Black Poetry : Waiting Patiently....

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know you've been waiting,
    waiting patiently for me,
    to say yes, I'm ready,
    to nod, to agree.
    But, while I'm tempted
    to lay and just let you do,
    I am much more seduced
    by the essence of you.
    I love your laugh,
    I adore your smile,
    those soft sweet lips,
    are just my style.
    Your voice never fails
    to make me weak,
    I love the poetry
    in the way you speak.
    The way you walk,
    man, you just glide,
    so confident you go,
    what strength in your stride.
    And then, there's just you,
    so caring and sweet,
    the lord must of had plans
    for the two of us to meet.
    Ummmm, ok....
    I know you've been waiting
    waiting patiently for me,
    such a warm, inviting,
    rapture it will be...
    Yes, I'm ready....
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is very touching...i like the vibe from your poem
    Peace
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you like the vibe, bluewater, trying to bring it down a peg...lol.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes...
    this was sweet.....
    its when ya say...
    what a man....nice write
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're liking this mzblkangel, yes, when ya say, what a man.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet love the rapture inside this
    indeed da things he do and make u feel
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With words like this, I can understand why he waited patiently.

    Such sweet feelings, very nice piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich and Positivemindset for feeling the sweetness in this vibe.
     
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    dadachango69 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so innocent and REAL... awesome drop, poet... it's nice to see these values again... this is such an important moment you've captured here...
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you felt the moment, dadachango69. Thanks so much for your response.
     
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