Black Poetry : Waiting In Vain?

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah tell it like it T. I. - - is....

    Girl this is Tizite!!

    What about the mileage -- you know, 5 miles til' empty!!
    Rollin' on the 'fumes'... :lol:

    Sista - keep on' - keepin' on!
     
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    lonely hearts blues...

    got you tracking the seconds going tick tock
    as the clock moves in slo mo
    and even tho
    you know this slow dance with eternity
    is a necessary evil, the misery of waiting
    got you hating every tick of that clock

    i'm feeling this.

    peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    NO! YA WAITING WILL NOT BE IN VAIN
    NOR SHOULD U HANG YA HEAD AS IF
    ASHAME BUT CLAIM YA TRUE VICTORY

    WATCH ACROSS THE LINES OF THE SKY BLUE
    AND FEEL THE TRUTH OF DA GAME OF LOVE
    AS THE CLOCK ROCK TIC TOC TIC TOC TIC TOC!!
    TYME PASSING YET ON TYME FORTH U R NOT IN VAIN.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.Baller.$$RICHNE$$. thanks for the read... glad you guys can "feel" me... & i continue to wait... :)...but ya'll got MY back... ryght?? (lol) AlwaysLove~
     
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    you know what they say...........

    Good things come to those who wait...
    Beautifully written sis..

    8th!
     
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    waiting is preparation
    praparation is blessings
    and blassings is you
    when he returns to embrace
    the rib he seeks...

    this is a nice scribe and no its not in vain...
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aah to be missed, bro better call soon though.

    beautiful flow
     
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    and the song goes ...

    " I caaan't leave,
    it's tooo ah oooo laaate ,,
    I caaaan' t leave, it's tooo - ooo late -
    cain't go nowhere - it's tooo ooo late "

    (greeneyes,MS.Silly E Badu )


    Ga-
    I am learning so much about your personality
    through these pieces.
    I hope HE is understanding enough
    to know when to come back.

    This was touching.
    It felt very personal.
     
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    raheem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    princess

    I'm feeling you


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