Black Poetry : ...waitin'...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    another song:):



    Verse 1:

    last night
    i called you
    had somethin' on my mind
    i said boy i got somethin' to tell ya
    you said babygirl just take your time
    it took all my courage to say it
    but i did it, and i'm proud
    i said boy
    i love ya
    i need ya
    i want ya
    to say with me for the rest of my life


    Chorus:

    and i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin for you to respond
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin to know if i need to move on
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin for a few simple words
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin
    i'm just waitin to know if i need to move on


    Verse 2:

    last night
    after i called you
    silence hung in the air
    i said baby please tell me what your thinkin'
    but still no response
    oh no
    but finally
    after a few minutes
    you said girl i got somethin' to say
    i said baby please tell me what your thinkin'
    cuz this waitin' is causin' me some pain


    (Chorus again)


    Hook:

    didn't know it would be so hard for you to say if you love me or not
    but i hold hopes and dreams that you'll say you feel the same


    Chorus 2:

    i have waited
    i have waited
    and found out that you love me too
    i have waited
    i have waited
    and i'm happy and glad that your mine forever
    i have waited
    i have waited
    and found out that you feel the same
    i have waited
    i have waited
    and i'm happy and glad that your mine forever...
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful as always :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again anothe beauty to the list
    the hot new CD coming soon !!
    beautiful work of art ...the writer .
    my copy sign .....
     
  4. sarcasm4eva

    sarcasm4eva Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was tyte......much love :)
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi, :wave:

    Another wonderful piece!!

    It is such a beautiful thing to be rewarded for waiting!

    I love this!!

    All my best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  6. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was a BEAUTIFUL song, do you do this for a living? Cuz that would be a great. Did u get married yet? Congrats!!!!!!!!




    I'm just sayin...
    The Dreamer
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much serenti

    ur so sweet rich

    thanks alot sarcarm


    :):):)
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwww thanks alot sierra and dreamweaver....:)
     
  9. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dramatic yet with a happy ending!
    enjoyed this!
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks skrybe!