Black Poetry : "waitin For My Blackman"

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  1. MentalEruptions

    MentalEruptions Member MEMBER

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    Mentally, IM searching for someone who will understand
    exactly who I am,
    It'll be a mutual attraction between man and woman

    Like the gravity from spaces black hole,
    His light, I'll consume
    Have thousands of ready-made stars festering in my womb.

    I'm searching for one who has sight,
    like a construction worker,
    When its time to build

    And if **** get hectic,
    my man will be ready to kill,
    for the sake of family
    And for the love of me
    This man would do anything,
    Backup his words and proposed with
    a wedding ring

    And to my children, he'd be more then a father,
    friends would consider him
    somewhat a role model

    Like Malcolm X, he'd help to enlighten are people,
    put them on to "Black Pride"
    Show them the importance of life;
    teach us how to eat right,

    Bring more to the table than beautiful love making,
    deep Caribbean accent,
    probably a Jamaican

    Skin could reflect any characteristic of chocolate,
    mind mad deep, no need
    to see what's in his wallets

    He'd be the one I'd long for when the heat is on,
    anything could remind me of him
    even a hip-hop love song, "The Light",

    Like "Common", he'd possess mad sense,
    put me on to coconut incense, and
    teach me how to meditate,
    Give me the best of " Nina Simone", on my birthday,

    Quote me Sonia Sanchez
    To inspire revolution…"
    Tell me I should pray in my time of confusion,
    mentally I'M searching for someone
    who will understand…"IM looking,
    IM waiting for a black man"
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a very nice piece.
    I enjoyed the read.
    Thanks for sharing. :)


    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da man thou KING
    so here dis i bring
    a token of love
    from above
    a little thing called
    a Diamond ring
    and to ya heart
    this i'll sing
    words of comfort
    peace to joy
    always be their
    2 hold u forever more
    be the man who
    understand
    asure u it's in GODS hand
    caresses of faith
    and that major role
    da fatherly love
    to one's child
    together in whole
    wit a forever smile
    the sweetness
    of ya $$RICHNE$$
     
  4. BlaqButterfly

    BlaqButterfly Member MEMBER

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    Good things come to those who wait. Nice flow.

    BlaqButterfly
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Knowing what you want can be half the battle-
    But just how important is that Caribbean accent / cause I can do a mean impression (LOL).
    Lovely flow
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i love mental orgasms

    i have a brooklyn accent maybe

    but all this you wrote

    is something I'M DEFINITELY feeling

    my sista peace and all that

    DSS
     
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