Black Poetry : wait a minute(song) my first flow

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey everyone here is what i consider to be my first flow
    i wrote this with the r. kelly
    when a womens fed up
    of course the song was screwed ( if u don't know what screw is its like dj mixing but the song is slowed down





    Wait a Minute

    The rising of the sun, birds chirping in the midst
    It’s a beautiful day, but Lord do I miss
    My baby, such precious memories
    Maybe if I give her a call, just one more please
    I call but she’s on the phone,
    My head jerks back and forth to a busy dial tone
    Often think why so much pain for me
    I try to tell myself I’m live, but I still can’t see
    I’m on a road with no traffic sign
    My windshield is frosted up, now I’m blind
    My foots on the brake, but I can’t seem 2 slow down
    Unconscious, seeing visions about that other ***** on the other side
    Of town

    (Chorus) (Repeat 2x)
    They say when a women’s fed up, be patient take your time
    Staring at the wall, wishing I could turn back time
    Now all I got is a vivid memory
    Full of all the sweet things she did for me

    U told me that u wanted me
    Reminiscing on how much u meant 2 me
    But its all gone, its cast away
    On my knees, searching, rambling for a better day



    But it’s all gone and out the door
    It’s evident that she don’t want me no more
    Her trust is gone, she’s insecure
    Now with my baby gone, I realize that her heart was pure

    (Chorus) (Repeat 2x)
    They say when a women’s fed up, be patient take your time
    Staring at the wall, wishing I could turn back time
    Now all I got is a vivid memory
    Full of all the sweet things she did for me
    Sitting in my room, thinking where’s my baby
    Tossing **** against the wall, cause I’m going crazy
    Without her love, what would I do, how would I survive
    I’m on a replay cycle so I can’t be Mr. 70Live
    I could recall we was of the same mold
    Now I’m walking without a coat in a world so cold

    (Chorus) (Repeat 2x)
    They say when a women’s fed up, be patient take your time
    Staring at the wall, wishing I could turn back time
    Now all I got is a vivid memory
    Full of all the sweet things she did for me

    (Repeat till beat ends)
    I could recall we was of the same mold
    Now I’m walking without a coat in a world so cold
    I wanted u to get older with me
    Lean on a shoulder with me
    Dodge these boulders with me
    But I guess my destiny was to be a lonely g

    Mr. 70Live 2001 Edition
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice love every line
    u pose a great vibe
     
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