Black Poetry : waaaake up!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 15, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling that breeze
    soft kisses touch like fingertips
    partially open lips
    say ahhh
    farther down
    moistened friction dances
    with bold delight
    quite a sight to see
    legs tensed just above the knee
    mmm...please
    don't stop
    caught up in raptures comforter
    gasping a tame roar
    give more arched spine
    contortionist jealousy
    romancing the delicacy
    spreading sweet jelly on toast
    take little nibbles
    just enough to whet appetites
    starving for forever
    a clever pucker
    brings passionate floods
    not even going to swim
    drowning happily in the essence
    this just can't go on
    why not?
    cause my **** alarm clock is ringing...;)
     
  2. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    must have been a all night thang (lol)
     
  3. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol...and you know this

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    laughing at the twist at the end. dat was talent flowing bruh...an excercise of wit when you spit it.
     
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    you've done it again man. tyte piece.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Three snaps and a twirl , you da man with this vere-ification!
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE