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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Akilah, Apr 17, 2006.

  1. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelings overflow
    Floating on LOVE ecstasy's
    Endless passion stream

    Like honey to bees...
    Addicted to your sweetness
    Your LOVE... my weakness

    Blessed by HIM above...
    "WE"...so hopelessly in LOVE
    You're mine...and I'm yours




    Akilah ~Apr 06
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautiful on love in the mainstream
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "We" ..have always sound better and warmer the "Me" ..
    nice vibe poet...^5
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Richest & QueenTswana...

    With much
    appreciation,

    Akilah ~
     
  5. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    Great form...I love the 5-7-5 x3 formula you use. Nice, very tight, condensed and to the point.
    You truly are a talent.
     
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    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww:smooch: this was shortstrong beautifulll sis....
    be blessed with him.....:bday: everyday









    love you...





    Loveauroraflower:heart:
     
  7. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww I just saw this...


    Thank you my sweet sistah auroraflower !

    Love you back :heart:
     
  8. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much thanks to you abstract219

    You are a very thoughtful person,
    and I appreciate your kind words

    Akilah :heart: