Black Poetry : Voyeur

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LyrikalShe, Apr 3, 2003.

  1. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I saw them
    In that little cave just beyond the waterfall
    I saw them
    He was tall
    Brown as the caramelized sugar on a creme brulee
    And his locs hung halfway down his back
    And I swallowed hard
    As he took her
    And threw her against the wall
    With one fluid movement
    He ripped her already damp dress
    From her quivering body
    She seemed frightened
    But as I looked closer
    The glint in her eye
    Belied the fear on her face
    She was loving every moment of this
    And I saw them
    As he pulled her hair to expose her neck
    I saw them
    She was petite
    The color of pecans
    And had curves like a cul-de-sac
    That perfectly complemented his angles and planes
    And I bit my lip
    As he placed his hands under her
    And lifted her to his waist
    She locked her ankles and her heels rested on
    An *** that begged to be touched
    And I found my hand reaching out
    Only to draw it back
    Because I saw them
    They didn't see me
    As he pounded into her
    Up against the wall in that little cave
    Just beyond the waterfall
    And she carved bloody rivers in his shoulders
    As her back arched
    And a scream escaped her
    Full, sensuous lips
    I wiped away the sweat
    That beaded on my brow
    Knowing I should go away
    Or at least look away
    But I couldn't
    My eyes were glued to the way
    His muscles tensed every time
    He thrust into her
    And as they came
    The walls of that little cave
    Just beyond the waterfall
    Seemed to shake from the force of their
    Simultaneous orgasms
    And I saw them
    As she seemed to slide down his sweaty body
    I saw them
    And as a contented sigh fled my lips
    They saw me

    c. 2002 Brandi N. Rainey
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  2. PloeMorphic

    PloeMorphic Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace

    Your poem is hot. Write ON.................
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    bring it on ya droppin' heatwaves
     
  4. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PloeMorphic...

    Thanks, you. 'Preciate it.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heatwaves? My word! Thank you.

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    LOVE IS LIKE A SEESAW

    This tight erotica had me sprung, seeing you, seeing them-

    1poetsought ~
     
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    i see you too
    the erotic potency of that poem pulls
    my pretenses pertaining peering in private
    in lue
    of what i know is right
    to think of the sheer delight
    in taking pleasure in 2 pawns
    both caught up in lustful insight
    makes my soul shiver simultaneously
    with the imagery you just delivered

    this was a phat piece...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She~

    Your talent has exploded all ova this peice! I loved every image... and found myself watching too...

    Uh Huh!
    Reas