Quiet Poetry Lounge : Vow within

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Dec 9, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As i sit in...
    my place in his life
    I have foreseen
    Now if he takes my hand
    He will know the worth of me
    for i found in him
    As I walk towards his heart
    Will he accept
    That I am the one
    Unto he I come
    With open arms
    As I take on a honor of
    Being his friend as
    I walk to be his
    Lover as we move
    thru the orbs
    Of time
    A loves call echoes within
    The doors of flight
    As I stand in the light…for
    I seek his approval of me
    Within thee my love
    Covers him as I am his rib
    Forever not want
    I shall give
    Unto you my love
    as i honor
    The person he shall
    be and become
    with no regrets
    upon him I lay
    My shield of heart
    our hopes
    and dreams of forever more
    as I am his strength
    he is my bond…
    together we fold as one
    within the kingdom we shall
    begin to call home….

    a blkangel thang...
    all copywrites reserved....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a very beautiful write sistah he so taketh de hand so will
    knoweth of thy heart and love ....tyte scribe
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very touching, mzblkangel.
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$....upon he i lay my shield
    of love....so that he may hear..glad ya like:angel1:

    watzinaname..thankz glad ya like:angel1:
     
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    you have such a gift, sistah. this is very beautiful.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Olakuoto and gempis..thanks for da love..
    much love to ya both...:angel1:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ah this is a beautiful flow sister
    Peace
     
  8. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words are so sweet.

    You've got love pouring from your every pore.

    So nice.
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater..thank you for your support i am glad you likes...Angel

    PositiveMindset (blushing)..thnkz glad you enjoyed the read...:angel1:
     
  10. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the vow within
    you brought without
    nice sharing of
    and i give out a shout...
    nice
     
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