Black Poetry : Vonnetta's Siren Call

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bishop, Feb 21, 2002.

  1. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inviting me to sup with you
    You call to me
    Knowing that I cannot resist
    The siren song you sing so well
    Ubzorbed
    By your passion
    I yield my members
    To thee
    Enthralled
    By your melody
    I bow in humble submission
    Your wish is my command
    I will do whatever you ask
    As long as you continue
    To sing your song
     
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    nice concept for the poem. "siren call" i like it
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful Bishop. However, I must say, upon coming in here, that I thought this poem was about Vonetta Flowers. Two days ago, she became the first black person to win a gold medal in the winter olympics. There is more than one Vonetta...obviously :)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop

    I can dig it Bruh! lol

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    B !

    Hot peice right here B....harmony all over this one.

    peace
    g-man
     
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    Bish,

    She may or may not hear...you know how those "Zorb"ed ones are!!! :laugh:

    Nice flow to Zorb aka "V" to me...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see

    there you go Bishop (I'll get you) and GQ I know you ain't talkin got a sista still waitin on her 30 seconds of nub!!!!!!!!!!:D oh and ma Tastey Cakes



    One
     
  8. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zorby you know I couldn't resist..I wrote this while I was watching you gettting OREO CRUMBS ALL OVA MY BLACK PANTHER RUG!!

    KEEP IT UP AND I'M GONNA HAVE TO CONFINE YOU TO THE HOT TUB!!!:grin:
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I on a diet so it wasn't me Bishop.
     
  10. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then what's that crumb in the corner of your mouth?..right there here let me get it:grin:
     
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