Black Poetry : VOLITILE

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (spelling correction = VOLATILE)


    Imbued in hot springs
    surrounding the base of
    my being...
    on the MOUNT

    ...OBSIDIAN...

    Midnight laced mood ~
    ...but in the morn'
    a golden sheen osculates
    over my body ~ back to front

    I stare into black glass
    as it blows air into
    my throat
    seeking the resevoir
    that holds
    buckets of steam
    ready to escape the
    intensity inside me
    ...A SAINT

    But that same treasure
    that is sought
    sits at
    the summit of the ocean ~

    Ashes that cover clouds
    shield me from the ring
    of fire and my own
    burning flames
    ...HELEN is my name~

    Giving way only to devitrification
    those black glasses
    take form in mass
    and rearrange into
    crystal patterns
    for what seems more
    like an organized tryst~

    Then I begin to speak in
    different tongues
    naming each of my procreations
    virtually the same

    In Syrian Arabic it's called ~ Berkaan
    In Japanese it's called ~ Kazan
    In Vietnamese it's called ~ Nui Lua
    In Swahili it's called ~ Voleno

    My still-birth became active,
    fuming as I exhaled
    My labor of love produced
    one daughter, Hg (vapor),
    and three sons,
    H20 (oxygen),
    C02 (carbon dioxide),
    S02 (sulfur dioxide)

    they were brought forth
    as love's children
    eruptions of many fathers
    to care for each of them
    as they are volatile...

    Arenal
    Tael
    Colima
    Kilauea
    and...Kilamanjaro

    Do you know these explosive men? ~~


    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2.....

    EXPLOSIVE(ly) tyght!!...

    do your thang sister dear... :)

    AlwaysPeace...
    SunShyne~
     
  3. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dr. Evil's headquarters !

    This was very impressive,
    Maaaan - If i had a chance to sit
    and pick your brain, and see where you pull
    some of this stuff from, i WOULD DO IT IN A MINUTE !!!

    this was beyond tight yo,
    gotta read it again!
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA~

    Aye mami...! Gracias.

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  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hypnotize~

    My lil' brotha ~

    Yes, in the lab is right...conjourin' up piecez
    of scribez!!

    Well all I can say is -- wheneva ya' ready to
    view the thoughts held captive in my mid-brain,
    just let me know ~ cause I don't hesitate to
    share some of the love in there!

    Thank you for your response-- and all jokes
    aside; your reply is appreciated!!

    1 :heart:
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is tyght...yes, indeed. keep on scibin'...i'm lovin' it, dear poetess.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lister~

    You know I diggz it when ya'
    come by to check your sista out!

    Thanks for the love ma!!