Black Poetry : Volcanic Heat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Bluewater, Jun 20, 2003.

  1. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you see the woman in me
    My King, you’re Queen
    Evolving into one.

    Can you feel the love flow?
    A joining ignites a candle glow.
    In, the still of the night.

    I am no other.
    No mask, no disguise.
    Moving to a ancient beat
    Distance drums. Arouse the heat.

    Feverish tension stirs the air.
    Ancient drums tempo induce
    Slow rhymes deepen the motion
    Swirling to a old beat. Heat rising.
    Blazing In the night.

    Volcanic explosion, lava pouring
    Tears flowing, breath shorten,
    Holding firm. Flood from the Eruption.
    Stirs the night.

    Peace :heart:
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow :toast:
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin it!! :heart:
     
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    This was so subtly..."HOT". Nice flow...Bluewater!
     
  5. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Bluewater,

    Very hot and sexy flow!! :hot: :flame:

    Nice read!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well now a heatwave coming in
    tyte scribe here
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you j'hiah ,SwtT,angelicsage,Sierra, and RICH so glad you all enjoy this flow thanks for the love family :grouphug:
    Peace
     
  8. mz_agapeluv

    mz_agapeluv Active Member MEMBER

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    very very tight loved it
     
  9. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you mz_agapeluv..much love to you
    Peace
     
  10. vanneya

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    i like your flow
     
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