Quiet Poetry Lounge : VOID......submission

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Nov 30, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Mystical adorn
    golden glow
    exhilarating
    anticipating
    afirm'd
    something
    missing
    big void
    deep in me

    Standing apath
    hungry & cold
    filthy laced in
    sorrow rags
    decay of disease
    cry of plea

    Suppression
    lingers deeper
    mentally
    physical weaken
    body raped
    mind stolen
    heart broken
    from dispair
    search for
    shelter from
    depression

    Da Struggling
    wondering soul
    lost in fold
    existence
    hopeless
    destitution
    afraid within
    no food
    no money
    no garments
    no home
    no job
    no life
    yet i see hope
    none en-void
    lost job habor
    the endless task
    how long will
    blacks struggle
    last

    Poverty reflects
    poison eyez
    dis mazed to
    life suprize
    born into da depth
    of slavery , struggle
    and full of greed
    from da lost long
    a dream of deed
    i cry in da path
    left behind

    my body maybe
    held in this captivity

    my heart may hurt
    a lifetime

    I may even be da
    prey of conviction

    but i have holyness
    a mind so free a
    depth of soul to let
    my spirit fly freely
    open the wind gates
    and rise through prayer
    see the mission through
    tears of pond and feflect
    from da sons of sun
    and the passing of light
    i fear not the darkness
    of what comes at night
    i have a place
    i shall rise , i shall rise
    and know i will not :bowdown: bowdown
    for thy master be not
    of this earth nor land
    mirror image is me i see
    and i shall rise beside me
    i will take as many along
    reach back !

    my people , our people
    our struggle , my struggle
    this life time ....i live , i live
    NONE EN~VOID ~~~~~~~X


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    2004 $R (NWP)
    Dyamondlov production
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be the mirror image of your people, their cries are your own, their fight is yours as well. Deeply written and felt.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    inside the same struggle we are one wholesome many yet not faced
    the dime more one hold is really penny less , unity to unite as people
    we hear da far cry of da people reach out !
     
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    this was awesome..I love when you bring it like this....very touching scribe speak on loving the flow....Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    we as people in a common place
    in search for freedom yet still bound
    by the struggling maze as people yet
    see the bond of unity very so needed
    to rise above the years of crying tears
    thankz Angel
     
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    The way this is written, I am with you every step of the way in every feeling. Beautifully posed, my brothah. :hearts2:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    then together gempis we shall go and rise my dear
    Thankz a million
     
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    we no longer can turn from the mission of our direction .
     
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    this is a powerful reflection of we as a community. The struggle is exactly that, a struggle. And until we can ALL acknowledge this fully, Brother RICH, we will rise above as one, and not separately. Now wouldn't that be a joy to behold. Lord bless all who have this in their site. Make our minds wealthy with grace and strength

    i love this poem Rich
    keep the flow goin
     
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    soon we shall bond in this unity to subdue the mission and the blessing set forth
    our only direction is up from this myth & deep struggle as people surely i lay my
    individualism down to hold a hand or two and raise my fist high .
    Thankz
     
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