Quiet Poetry Lounge : VOICE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Nov 6, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Out of existance
    a dancing sound
    soft & tenderly mild
    raising in echoes
    so seductive as it
    appeal and defies
    a rapture in heart
    beautiful symphony
    floating on majestic
    wingz like a choirs
    rivering deeper into
    my soul, I grasp for
    breath to breathe
    exhaling to inhale
    the moment of da
    VOICE :luv:
    can it be LOVE.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this rivers deep
    love the love in this flow
    that voice have away
    of speaking loud sweet and smooth
    tight write Richie Rich

    Think i can get in it a card.....:wink:
     
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    Could be Rich...sure sounds like it to me. Enjoyed the metaphor of this symphony called love.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz Angel it just resound me deeper

    Thankz watz as it's captured within deeply
     
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    The beat
    Vibes in tender echoes
    As it seduces the
    Mind and take over the heart
    Is this love?
    The fire it brings
    Sneaks in da night
    And shelters the being
    Calms the mind
    Breathe
    Is this love
    I am feeling
    The voice rings out
    sound resound
    invade...exhale
    and listen within
    as the temple beats the theme
    is this love
    Upon the dew
    of the morning shine
    The voice speaks
    Louder each time
    Can it be
    Shall it
    Is this loveā€¦.
    as the voice begins
    to
    conquer..........
     
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    i guess u map that out to perfection
    yep on point sista Angel Thankz
     
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    this is poppin, baby
     
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    thankz gempis coz u poppin honey
    big ups sis.....
     
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    The "voice" you hear...can only be heard by you, so it must be the voice of love.
     
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    Thankz queentswana it must be true love coz i really hear it
    so clear and loud yet a sweet whispering hush .................
     
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