Black Poetry : Voice to her face

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    As swiftly capturing
    her soft marble voice
    my heart opens allowing
    the echo run in deep
    my eyes close to the
    sound and my mind wonders
    off into the place of reasons
    he beauty is vision as da face
    to thy voice i hear in my head
    listening intently
    like captivity of a musical note
    the strings pull and play within
    my soul cascade outward
    placing da voice to face
    i stumble, to the whispers
    and vision her beings
    i so thank GOD for the time
    to make such a Queen for me
    and allowing me to enter her
    rose garden, i now walk in the
    bedded beauty of her spirit
    i feel the womanly spray from
    her touch and the voice
    i place together from the hand
    that scribe the words of comfort
    and shower me in love from
    the doubts of myth to reality
    she is a prime jewel, a ruby smile
    and dark n' lovely tone her eyes
    are da diamond sparkle and her
    body is da black essence of pearls
    i sit deep in my corner space inside
    the heavy chambers as my mental
    feel and capture all it's beauty
    she know not how i watch
    how i prayed and gave my love
    unto her divine soul , i pen my quest
    to pad and note how her dear sheer
    honor is passed into the pathway of
    my lovin heart and clash wit my respect
    she may never know and she may never
    understand by light years but unto the
    grounds at the gate i so stand and
    welcome this queen to my life forever
    as i tab the voice to thy face
    and cover it deep in my soul
    I can't revel but rewrightand rezone
    to renounce the acts of placing us
    together at the helms of love and grace
    so i now wait til my day and my hour
    and maybe she see me at the left
    i know to look upon her is like kissing
    da sunglass but every star sparkle i
    know it a tear of love
    i now face the voice into my life
    she now of me as i am of her .

    Da mystery continues :spinstar: :heart: :huh:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    [email protected] this was so tight
    can i say that...wow
    you had me wishing upon a star
    hoping it was me
    you was writing about..
    you match ya pen to the pad and went deep
    i want more
    on the wall this go
    and ummmm in the book i keep of yours...

    dayum this was wheeeeew
    ok.....

    Angel
     
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    she whom it may be
    not anounced but
    walks in the vally of
    my temple and scribe
    the dots of true love
    she is alive and real
    but yet know i am !!!

    Thank u sistah Angel ya never know until it open it's doors
     
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    Whew...I had to read this twice. I particularly liked these lines:
    "to thy voice i hear in my head
    listening intently
    like captivity of a musical note
    the strings pull and play within
    my soul cascade outward
    placing da voice to face"
    But the entire scribe was simply soul stirring. Wow....
    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    Thank u watz ................
    yet the unbound
    love and da heart
    of reason is touched
    i send my whisper
    to tame the motion
    and place the face to voice
    as i read her script she will
    come to light before long pt.II
    NEXT!
     
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    i feel her near like da radiant shine
    gleaming on me opening my heart
    up for deep emotions and blissful
    rapture i shall can ya name only
    once forth u may cometh unto me
    then my beloveth for i so loveth u
     
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    u laid this out
    really feeling this vibe
    even if shes a mystery
    she gives u a magic touch
    to scribe a masterpiece
     
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    ya pen and scribe is awesome rich:) on to part 2
     
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    thankz soon her face shall match the voice and hand of pen
    that cascade me deep into her soul and i so loveth it but da
    spell cast will break da mystery open .
     
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    thank u swtT............
    as i sing the song i so vow
    and she will cometh again
    to the open someday she
    will know of my love .......
     
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