Quiet Poetry Lounge : VOICE of CORRUPTION

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Aug 24, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside a hush of yesteryears
    raise a voice in crackin tears
    from all our struggling fears
    yet downing others it appeal
    working under self thrill

    They are busy on ever street
    taken souls week by week
    from somewhere to nowhere
    from what da voice speak

    I can hear it loud and clear
    nothing tappin in care we bare
    yet we continue to feed in
    to the creed of ameri-land
    of the pitted devil to rise
    why am i not so suprised

    Undeciphered , unfulfilled lives
    like none-existent wove hives
    from the holla and screammin cries
    lackin understanding in the plan
    time to change what we can
    from under the buried spirits at hand

    Voices of corruption will never stop
    only we as people can make it jock
    from our renowed souls on da spot
    like a beautiful symphony sound of morrow.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$:
    This is a wonderful write. Do flo on....

    Much luv to you
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm you better do it RICH, bring on the knowledge and lay it down with a tyte flow....i'm scared of you. You're the reason why white me are scared of black men. keep up the good work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you 4EVERLUV your words and warmth means a lot .

    Thank you dearly choclatangel i aim to let them know we are
    and here to stay now but with greater pride and strong will to
    be as proud of our blackness in awareness .
     
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    BANGING

    U DROPPED THAT INTO THE VERY PIT.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u sista SoulFAreal tyme the truth be told
     
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    sheikdadon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop poet i liked how it flowed

    keep up da heat!!!
     
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    Thank u so much sheikdadon for the warmth and lovin visit within
     
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    corruption has taken souls
    time we rise, love and mold
    from our mind let it be told
    voices feed dirty deeds
    corrupting our living seeds
    we have to change the tune
    set the nightly mood
    jock the spots they have hit
    battle in the struggling kiss
    let poverty know we alive
    and as people we set to rise
    beyond and above
    freeing the mindz of humankind
    stop the corruptional maze
    that has taken us in blaze
    we become fire vs fire fuel the pits
    but my fellow in da morrow
    we as people not having this
    free ya mind, free ya mind
    show some heart
    share some love
    stop the corruption upon self
    on our sisters & brothers
    stop the blaming & pointing
    stand and the historical soul
    know we are as pure as gold
    from thy hands he has mold
    stop da corruption people.
     
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    a true free ya mind wake up flo .. nicely done $$RICH$$:welldone:
     
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