Black Poetry : vivid

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  1. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    vivid - having the clarity and freshness of immediate experience;
    evoking lifelike images within the mind;
    having high saturation and therefore being of the
    greatest intensity or hue

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    sunshine on my face
    on a crisp winter day
    bright shining
    vivid
    the sky
    blue-grey
    before a thunder storm
    neon
    electrically charged
    vivid
    azure waters
    deep and cool
    vivid
    all these things
    vivid
    like your love
    vivid
    wrapped around me like a cashmere stole
    shielding me from the chill of the evening
    vivid
    memories of
    childhood mornings in bed before
    it was time to hit that
    oh so cold floor
    vivid
    the first time i experienced pain
    vivid
    the first time i experienced joy
    vivid
    my memories and remembrances
    like a movie on the big screen
    vivid
    the beauty of life
    vivid
    the wondrousness of this journey
    vivid
    unforgettable
    sometimes regrettable
    but always
    always
    vivid
    vivid
    vivid
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vivid vibin'!!!

    I likes!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the luv, GQ

    dee:blush:
     
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    Oooooooh, that's niiiiiiiice!
    You done good on dis heah.
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sis!

    dee
     
  6. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MzD.


    i love the images vivid-ly displayed in this piece.

    thank you for sharing them! now... write on poet!

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful flow of images!

    N2 :)
     
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    Mzdee

    This was a very nice enjoyable read. Thanks. :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  9. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elayne, thanks sistah for the read! :spinstar:

    N2, the love of the flow is the best part of the poet's journey...thanx for the luv! :spinstar:

    COCO, thanks for the read! i'm glad u enjoyed it! :spinstar:


    dee
     
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    vivid like my smile after reading
    this thread.
    like the thoughts in my head
    turning red from blushing
    blood-rushing......

    likitalot
    hw
     
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