Black Poetry : Vivid

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Last night I held my pillow tight,
    then closed my eyes

    ~amazingly

    you came to life
    we strolled the beach
    under the moon lit sky.
    awoke to the sunrise
    glistening in our eyes
    had a romantic picnic
    in the park, cuddled there
    til almost dark

    ~suddenly

    we're enjoying dinner by candle light
    feeding each other little bites
    while playing foot c's underneath the table
    the savor of your cologne so vivid
    your presence so passionately felt through out
    the magical atmosphere
    lying still, trying not to open my eyes,
    for fear you might disappear, releasing a sigh
    Ohhh~to my pleasant surprise

    ~miraculously

    we're swept into a gentle whirlwind of burning desires
    embraced in a slow dance to the tune of a love ballad created
    by the beating of our hearts


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cindy,

    It's nice to see you on the board. I thank you for the holiday greeetings and I wish the same for you and your family.

    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sweet scene...

    but then we have to wake up...and it's always right at that critical moment...and we can't go back...:cry:

    K

    ps...be back soon...lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautiful

    dream of thoughts
    beyond reality
    and awaken to
    a feelin' of everlasting :love:
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    and

    this was very vivid

    feelin' it

    DSSNY
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana, Ain't that the truth. Hurry back! :)

    $RICH$, How sweet. Thanks for the love


    So'ja, Just my imagination running away with me. :D


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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    Sirr Curt New Member MEMBER

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    Say Love! I hate having to open my eyes to reply...i like that!
     
  8. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Curt,

    I like what you wrote....such a romantic reply. Thanks.....Oh yeah! Allow me to welcome you to the family and thanks for showin a sistah some love.

    Madd Holiday Greetings
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cocoa

    I wanted to drop a flow to this so bad.... This was tight Coco!

    Foreva diggin ya art
    Reas
     
  10. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas,

    The art diggin is mutual :wink:

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
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