Black Poetry : Vivid Thoughts

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THEONE, Sep 21, 2005.

  1. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It started out for you
    Turned about you
    Vivid thoughts of Erotica
    Involving me and you
    Can I visit that island
    Your sacred spot
    Can I climb in the trenches
    Where its soft and hot
    Let me explore
    Your sexual emotions
    The things that make you sweat
    Let me create an ocean
    By making you more than wet
    We'll play a game
    Called touch the write spots
    As I touch, you moan
    My hands and body never stops
    Up and down,round and round
    To accomplish one thing
    A sigh of relief,
    While u scream about
    How hard you came
    Amazement I wont to set
    I know our bodies already met
    Each time,I stroke you
    Ill get better, I bet
    Licking down your neck
    Teasing myself with your taste
    Hastefully sliding down your body
    Time Im not trying to waste
    Can we meet on that peak
    Called climax, and see
    Facial expression so deep
    Intimacy between you and me
    Signs of disbelief
    So relaxed,
    Just shaking of knees
    Try to talk
    But only saying please
    DON'T MOVE!

    Lj
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was butter smooth and steamy just so Vivid.......whewwww!
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    eeeeeeeewwwwwwweeeeeeeee

    - "drop it like it's hot"................well done!
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read $$$$RICH$$$ , INFO
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Erotic thoughts, posed so sensually. So wonderful to read something new from you poet.
     
  6. Inque

    Inque Active Member MEMBER

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    Smooth, so smooth and creates a highly sensual mood...I really enjoyed reading this. Chills!
     
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