Black Poetry : Vision...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision…..
    You and I
    By candle light
    Vision in sight…
    Focus the attention..
    As I give it….
    No restrictions
    Just you and I
    intertwining
    The soul of romance..
    Under the moon light
    From the window
    We sit in harmony
    By the fire…
    Union of two souls…
    you touch my face
    wipe away a tear..
    my body response
    in chills…the love
    over flowin two souls
    yearnin for the same thing
    red satin clings to my skin as you
    begin to hold me close…
    an Angel uplifted
    as the passion began to show thru
    feeling the mood and the
    sharing of this moment..
    love was set free
    upon the room a gentle
    calmness came..
    holding the two.
    .touchin and
    caressing
    exploring
    and feeling
    as the emotions ran..
    the heart beat in sound
    as we laid arm in arm
    promises made
    by two to interfold as one…
    Vision…..
    You and I
    Intertwining
    Passionate
    Perfection
    Of a blissful
    Mix of two becoming one….
    By candle light
    Vision in sight…
    Bodies on move with
    The flicker of the light…
    Shadows against the
    Wall tells the story of two
    Who just became one….
    Vision…..
    You and I
    By candle light
    Vision in sight…
    Focus the attention..
    No restrictions
    Of
    Two
    Becoming
    One………….

    a blkangel thang..... :angel1:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was FLAMIN'.......you alwayz do your poems so I feel your insight.....and this was was blazin...it was amazin'......I was hooked on every word......tyte.....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    vision in sight
    guided by candle light
    from flyte open tonight
    da vision
    of u and i
    bodies in motion
    slow rollin
    to perfection
    feelin
    da affection
    swing my
    direction
    as love flow
    deep ya know
    caressin
    mastering
    dippin
    feelin
    holding
    under candle light
    things i do
    as flames flicker
    i sweep ya soul
    go deep
    make it whole
    as we fold under
    the flames
    as u call my name
     
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    :bowdown: nice flo!
    GOD BLESS :angel1:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The vision
    Of you and I
    On open flight
    Kept in a slow motion..
    As this perfect vision
    Takes control…
    It interfolds the bliss
    Of a heat made
    By two….
    Sweating
    Moaning
    Mastering
    In perfection
    In that moment
    Love set free
    Grasping a new
    Of love like spring
    Comin into summer
    Back to fall..
    into the first snow fall
    The movin
    of the seasons…
    As we lay under
    the flickerin fire
    sweep my soul
    as it gets deeper
    callin your name
    in sweet melody sounds
    as you take me round and around..
    kissin with care
    touchin with passion
    By candle light
    Vision in sight…
    Focus the attention..
    No restrictions
    Of
    Two
    Becoming
    One………….
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    holdin
    rollin
    two hearts beat
    u and i
    lovin so sweet
    we dip n' dab
    slow motion
    ride
    deep i be
    rockin inside
    da vision of
    bliss
    changing notions
    of seasonal mass
    hot flames of
    winter caressin
    ya body
    as one we be
    under da
    visional mental
    spring break
    just to cool
    but dis love
    over rule
    to a summer
    feast a treat
    so sweet
    u and me
    deep deep deep !!
    fall fast
    love how two
    just last
    as
    one whole
    under the
    thing call
    LOVE !
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    foxylady30315..love ya thank you for all the love and support means so much...:angel1:

    BaduX..thanks for da love
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Vision in sight…
    Focus the attention..
    No restrictions
    Just you and I
    intertwining of
    Two hearts beatin as one..
    Inside the night..
    Souls touch
    As tears of joy
    Fall down…
    Becoming weak
    As you take
    Your treat..
    By candle light
    Angels in the sky
    Sing sweet melodies
    Of two become one
    Deep perfection
    Takes the notion to move
    In emotions..as the loves flows
    Thru are blood…
    Vision in sight…
    Focus the attention..
    No restrictions
    Of
    Two
    Becoming
    One………….
     
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    OOOO MY SWEET YOU KNOW ME SO WELL.
    YOU KNOW JUST WHAT WORDS TOO TELL.
    EACH ONE RINGS A HEAVENLY BELL.
    YES,MY SWEET, STRONG ARE MY ARMS,STRONGER
    STILL MY WILL,IT'S SET ON...WE WILL.
    ONCE AS WITH YOU A PIECE AND PEACE WERE
    MISSING FROM MY LIFE. I WAS FILLED WITH STRIFE
    YOU CAME, YOU HEARD, YOU MADE ME YOURS,SO TO,
    YOU HAVE A WILL THAT'S STRONG.
    I FEEL THE SOFT WIND BLOWING ACROSS MY BROW.
    I FEEL THE REELING FROM PASSIONS SWEET HEAT.
    I FEEL YOU! I'M HAPPY THAT,THAT PIECE I SEEK IS YOU...MY QUEEN,LISTEN TOO THESE WORDS
    FEEL THEM IN YOUR HEART,
    HOLD THEM IN YOUR BEING,
    BATH THEM WITH YOUR ESSENCE
    GRIP THEM WITH YOUR SOUL.

    I CAN,YOU WILL,AND SHALL BE, THE MISSING PIECE FOUND...MY PUZZLE IS COMPLETE
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sorry, Sister Ola i didnt see you in the mist of all that writtin...
    thank you for your love and support...
     
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