Quiet Poetry Lounge : Vision 1

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NDeep, May 1, 2003.

  1. NDeep

    NDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A vision is a mental projection
    An imperfection in the realm of reality
    A cheat, sneak peak into future decisions
    I seen one, a vision

    A mirror image of my past, a mirage of my last
    Future rolling around
    In the sound of my present
    I seen one

    The vision was of particles of light
    Suspended in the realm of sight
    Caught up in the fabrication of the night
    I seen another vision

    Of a bird without wings
    Strangely enough were these things
    But that bird continued to sing
    I seen a vision

    This one of a man fighting a reflection of himself
    He lost and the reflection fought his shadow
    His shadow won and fought the lights who created him
    No one won, I seen a vision

    Endless possibilities floating around in an abyss
    Of voices that screamed "YES!"
    I seen a vision

    Of a white night sky w/ black stars
    Of a universe that fit in the palm of my hand
    And a place where lives were measured w/ grains of sand
    I seen a vision

    Then I woke up....

    (I'm new. Tell me what you think)
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome NDeep welcome!!

    welcome to destee's quiet open flows
    welcome wit dis vision
    welcome to da house of love
    inside da vision i see image of a poet
    this vision is in scribe as i feel ya vibe
    nice flow loved it !!! :)
    welcome happy to feel u in flow :heart:
    :jumping: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :jumping:
     
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    loved this piece. Gave me a Vision of your vision.
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I see you drop the tight flow straight from your dome
    Welcome to Destee.com, you're new home

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:
     
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