Black Poetry : Virtuoso

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 5, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    See me, :star:
    Flowing...
    Dark rivers overflown
    Feeling seasons
    Being in the zone

    I can be all that...
    With them at my back
    Would you pay
    Just to hear me

    As virtuosos go
    Everybody knows
    What we pay,
    Can be revealing

    Though improbable
    We're illogical
    Even I,
    Don't have the reason

    Well...

    Could it be color,
    Shadowed...
    Phases of our moon :new:

    Riffs would be,
    Rhythm...
    Driven...
    Spinning nature's loom

    Hear me now!

    See me...
    In an evening
    Or a lazy afternoon, baby

    Feel me any morning
    As it's dawning-

    COMING SOON



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice!

    I would love to hear this spoken.

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is kinda obscure, kinda clear, really COOL, 1 poet. great read
     
  4. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can be all that...
    With them at my back
    Would you pay
    Just to hear me ~

    Thank you, very much!
     
  5. Khasm13

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    nice piece here holmes...
    you've been lay'n dem down
    all around...
    one love
    khasm
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i would :heart: to hear u my brotha and I know eerryone else is ready
    so ...when u gon bless us with this one in voice chat? :D
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each one of your responses have the impact of a hundredfold, leaving me wealthy beyond my wildest imagination. I am so grateful to be apart of this community and am truly humbled by your continual expression of unconditional love. Because of you, hope springs eternal.
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Had 2 keep comin' back 2 this one 2 get the whole feel,

    but now that it's gotten...

    Tight piece, got my mind working.