Black Poetry : Virtual Personality

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, May 2, 2016.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Pressure is building
    My personality is dripping as an apartment ceiling
    Racquet balling my feelings
    Steam being built up like window paining
    The corn popping is always feining
    For the flavor of the month
    Only protection is my daily warranted cloth
    If the same people say you should be ashamed
    I'm warranted
    But burning is not a reason to be flaunted
    I'm tired of being taunted
    Theirs rules to this and you will be faulted
    Research who you be...
    In order for your success
    How can I flee my successor
    To ultimently be
    OG How the first pop seemed.
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    Geez
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wrote something similar today. Great minds must think a like. Love your work and your train of thought
     
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    NikkiRenee going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I really admire your work! For sure Sis
     
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