Black Poetry : Virgo Vibe

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  1. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He was watching me
    & I never knew it
    As I poured passionate poetry from lips
    Eyes closed in the beauty of painting pictures
    I felt him absorbing my energy
    Dancing with my vibe
    Was not really trying to see this brother, Wazir, of 6ft
    Bronzed skinned
    Black dreads
    Intelligent, thoughtful eyes
    I was trying not acknowledge the vibe between us
    Mouthed the same words as him
    "The Black Man is God"
    When we joined hands in the love circle at the end of the night
    Smiling to myself secretly
    Neglected to return his gaze
    Even as I walked out the door of the open mic
    He came to me again two days later
    Sending messages via a friend to call him
    Pleasantly surprised I called
    Only to be greeted with
    Your voice is like music to my ears...
    I asked coquettishly:
    "Are you going to teach me something?"
    He asked the same and I replied:
    "We can learn from one another..."
    I could hear the smile in his voice as he murmured
    "You've passed the first test..."
    So preceded the mental seduction
    He is brother cut from cloth of 5% notions
    A weakness of mine for fine Muslim catz
    Who rap sweet words inside Black God intellect
    Quoted me psalms in Arabic
    Called me Earth and Queen of The Universe
    & I can't deny it made my soul smile
    Made my cheeks flush a little with pleasure
    Ears tingling to hear the mellow bass timbre of his voice
    Liking this knew entrancing energy
    Crackling with a sensual undertone
    I don't want to confess to yet
    Trying to shake this growing intensity inside
    My thoughts seem to beckon him to call
    "I was just thinking about you....."
    Breathily, almost whispering back:
    "Me too..."
    Pores of my brownskin heated with daydream visions of him
    Obscene fantasies floating before my eyes
    Of him and I entwined naked
    Tasting
    Heat
    Salty sweat
    Clinching locks between my fingers
    Nails digging into his back
    Spine arching
    Pelvises thrusting
    Blood singing
    Pulse throbbing
    Screaming in unimaginable ecstacy
    'WAAAAAAAAAAZIRRRR!"
    Cries coming from a primal place deep inside
    Having to catch my breath and blink the visions away
    Heart pounding, and dry mouthed
    How could I be so indecent?
    It's only been three days since we first met
    & already this brother has got my mind open, panties wet
    I keep telling myself to ignore the pull of his Virgo vibe
    The sign who is my sexual weakness and mystifies and compels me mentally & emotionally
    So I sit cheeks aflame & ashamed
    Yet still feeling so deliciously lusty
    Wicked *** Scorpion grin on my face
    Thinking maybe I'll just give him a little taste
    Just a little to satisfy this feening sex demon inside
    Cuz these days a sista is horny as a hellcat
    & I'm trying to be disciplined
    But this brother is sin so good
    Sin so good
    Allah, Father, Christ, Holy Spirit, any diety forgive me!
    Because I can't deny
    That I'm definitely diggin
    This brother's Virgo Vibe
     
  2. LyrikalShe

    LyrikalShe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Quoted me psalms in Arabic
    Called me Earth and Queen of The Universe
    & I can't deny it made my soul smile
    Made my cheeks flush a little with pleasure
    Ears tingling to hear the mellow bass timbre of his voice"

    Now you got my attention with this one! Dayum sista! This is too tight!!

    Serenity...
    Brandi
     
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    thrusting pelvis
    salty sweat
    wow,
    how can i forget!

    lustful and tasteful, i feel that one.
     
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    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks yall. *still fanning self* :)
     
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    that piece
    has left me
    speach
    less
    those words of primal power
    with a sprinkling of saturated shower

    21 haz skilz
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You made me smile at this one :)
    Hmmm trying to remember this little chant that we used to say as kids, bout sin being in hmmmm going try and think of it for ya.
    Tyte piece.... just remember the heart is more fun to follow than the head.

    *Emma*
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Dig'n the vibe here!


    souldeep!
    Coco
    :heart:
     
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    wow, i really enjoyed this...it was intense! heard it spoken on the open mic as well as painted pictures in my head...thank you...i enjoyed this piece.
     
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