Black Poetry : Virginity

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nisa, Oct 6, 2004.

  1. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've known you for along time
    I've studied you...
    Embraced your words....your beauty
    You inspired...comforted...embraced...
    My thoughts...
    That night I decided to give you my spirit...
    Penetrate My womb...
    ..Give you the best of me...
    My blood flowed onto your crisp white sheets...
    You made me stroke all through the night...
    Heavy breathing...words of love...
    Filled the air....
    We orgasmed....
    I became pregnant...
    Gave Birth to our daughter...
    Named her....

    POETRY!!
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry, as pure as pure can be.

    Very nice!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...Your words were so crisp, just brimming with the earthy reality of the labor and delivery of...poetry. Wonderful scribe, so artfully formed.
     
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    Yo I'm loving this one.......the birth of a scribe can be a beautiful thing.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    very nice scribe....this was love
    nice write..Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely posed wow!!!

    do hope you consider or decide on a membership here at destee's
    to enjoy the full benefits offered as a premium member and support
    to a community of unity look at all what you missing out on !
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882
     
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    WOW :hi: Im diggin this MS NISA nice drop
     
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    Poetry, the true labor of love. Nice drop, Nisa!
     
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    nisa, this was a awesome write
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Im lovin this. Good flow. Very deep. :heart:
     
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