Black Poetry : Violet

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  1. JohnDDD

    JohnDDD Member MEMBER

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    Nother one from me, this one is for all the women out there, in the spirit of a great rapper I'd like to say: keep ya head up.

    Voilet

    He taunts her.
    Haunted mind
    brings more beer.
    Fuddled, out-hustled,
    fueled by void.
    A c-ck crows
    not wavers.
    no audible screams,
    just the silence
    of his wreaked hunger
    upon what once was.
    just another murder,
    another streaming violet
    waving in the wind.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely pose'd well done
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice scribe
    well posed
    thanks for sharing.....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Her soul is dead even if her body is still warm. All too familiar to some. Deeply written and felt.
     
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