Black Poetry : VIOLENT CRY.....Destroyer

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Delt upon dirty deeds
    destruction aim in plea
    upon the communities
    massive cling, pushing dreams
    killing blings, death they sing

    Caught in a diabolical snare
    by a threating fire stare
    where some cast no care
    in society set unfair
    as the hunter bags da prey
    to use them and cast away

    In too deep on life's street
    from the broken home of beast
    seeking love something to feast
    our children become victims
    like human treat
    numb , shaken and cries leak

    Drugs become gang of roses
    guns become beloved to rely
    stop da killing don't let another die
    every verse ten lives end
    by the hands of stressed black men
    from the past pain and stains
    da mental slavery that taken da brain

    No excuses to name
    still one's point to blame
    no action abid , just death to these kids
    aging in depth fourteen to twentyone
    our children daughters and sons
    in the violent deception of life long morrow
    crumbing down like da twin towers
    da cries heard every second of a tic
    when we rise to end this titttttt !

    My body lay capside yield beyond light
    living in da mist of another fright night
    praying to God wit all my might
    that it may end one day this life
    in despair i stand to fight
    da violent cry destroyer of this flight.

    :oops: :bomb: :madd: :fight: :argue: :uzi: :hammer: :danger:

    Every second , mintue , hour , day by day night after night
    one of our children become a prey of violent acts by drugs
    guns and abuse that cause death , pain and screams ........


    A Dyamondluv Plea&Cry
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my bratha rich u did it rite hurr
    i mean i was feelin yo deep truthful flo on dis
    our childs are joining gangs and gettin involed wit da wrong crowd
    but will dis eva stop??....how long will dis continue? how far will dis act go?
    we must pray 4 desez plpz and our luved ones
    so flo on wit truths, wit nonstop


    blackluv and bp



    :yesno: <<<< c wut stressed black plp do its ashame ..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed sista ghettoambition we have to stand up make a vow
    and change the game plan for our children / love ones and friends to
    bring hope back into the communities that has been cast off in society.

    Thank u for feeling me here today on this piece.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u is so true bout dat bratha rich
     
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    yes , now we have to teach and pray that they hear our words
    make a change put down the guns , leave the corners and become
    drug free and find a way back into the books for better knowledge
    a higher education to make an impact in today's society , again thankz sis
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well dang all i can say iz preach on and a men ...lol


    blackluv and bp
     
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    up next the terror in the hood , stay tune sis....
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I CAN'T WAIT MY BRATHA !!! ...LOL


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    Thankz sis , it's coming !
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: wow, you spit that hot fire! You took the words right out my mouth. I was working on a topic very similar. Good job poet!:welldone:
     
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