Black Poetry : Vint. Material pt III

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Under this moonlight I ponder.....

    Are questions just answers with a different phrase
    Is death just life in a different phase
    Do we all seek God in different ways
    Under this moonlight I ponder....

    Why is it rich men sometimes seem sad
    And some good things turn out to be bad
    And some people miss what they never had
    Under this moonlight I ponder....

    Why are some people ashamed of who they are
    And distance themselves somewhere out far
    Is there healing for internal scars
    Under this moonlight I ponder...

    Where do we run and where do we hide
    When we're failed by egos and betrayed by pride
    Realizing we're all little children inside
    Under this moonlight I ponder...

    Is everything cause and effect
    Is it only either foolish or wise
    Will I continue to ponder under this moonlight
    Until the sun decides to rise
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin this vintage material. Liked the way you posed this never ending cycle of questions.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what a 3 part series here ya pen on fire
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yall have no idea how hard it was to post these, but then I believe all poets understand each other somehow. As always thanks for the love Rich and Whatzinaname
     
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    Life=??????

    U stop living when U stop seeking answers.

    Nice piece.
     
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    this wa tight
    makes ya think as well
    nice work poet
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    similar thoughts
    each day past
    another day an adventure
    trying to understand
    the question why
    filled with doubts
    filled with hope
    filled with question
    that could be answers

    (nice oh so very nice...)
    enjoying your flows
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks again for the love you all...it means so much. Mz blakangel- you on fi'
    Positive mindset- So glad I took the time to read some of your stuff
    Bluewater-what can I say??????

    Peace and love

    P.S. I think I'm working up the nerve to try a callabo with someone....any takers????
     
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