Black Poetry : Vint. Material pt.II

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  1. twision

    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    JustsomethingIwortewhileIwasyetagainthinking

    Sometimes I cry for no reason
    And I wonder if that's strange
    Then I wonder what's "normal"
    And end up logically strained
    Emotional waters run deep
    Egos rest upon shores
    I separate from my complexities
    To be confused all the more
    Who am I? What is this?
    I feel useless in my shell
    Yet it's the only Heaven I have
    In this world of endless Hell
    I'm sorry if you don't understand
    It's not my intent to complicate
    It's just my soul itself is strange
    So I always contemplate
     
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    Wonderful stream of consciousness running onto paper.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it flow all out
    this tyte keep it coming !!
     
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    I most definitely feel this.

    Nice.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

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    nice drop
    i can feel this
    peace
    Angel
    continue on...
     
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    nice one
    the thoughts from within
    indeed flowing
    Peace
    BkueWater:heart:
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Twision

    intricate
    full of motion

    /antar
     
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